On
reviewing the image though I decided there were two
problems. Firstly the fruit was just poking out of
nowhere, there was nothing holding it up, visually
that is.
Secondly, while the light did show all the parts of
the fruit, it was boring. I felt I could do better.
By reframing I included just a portion of the fruit’s
supporting stem, problem number one solved, now what
about the light?
By placing the flash below the fruit I got some very
attractive key lines around it, but the top half was
too dark. Adding a reflector above the subject fixed
that. Problem number two solved.
The background still had a few distracting highlights,
and the stem was not perfectly aligned with the edge
of the frame, nothing that couldn’t be fixed
on the computer in a few minutes.
Result,
a very simple and elegant photo |